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 # SYNOIA
 ## A PSYCHOTIC GUIDE TO THREAT MODELING, SECURITY CULTURE, AND TRUST
 
-one of [the authors](the%20authors.md) pats the blanket, an invitation to sit between them. the sun throws fire across the clouds, and casts the graveyard in gold. crickets. evening birdsong. a nip in the air that makes you glad the one with wings put one around your shoulders.
+one of [the authors](the%20authors.md) pats the blanket, an invitation to sit between them. the sun throws fire across the clouds, and casts the graveyard in gold. crickets. evening birdsong. a nip in the air makes you glad the one with wings put one around your shoulders.
 
+so, stardust. how's consensus reality holding up out there? you started seeing things yet?
 
+i hear that ICE is everywhere,